Nya
I agree with Darkman. It was great up till the record sounds, that just totally shattered the feel. If I may make a request, could you make an alternate version that leaves out the record bit, and maybe the techno bit, too. A soft tune, done right on the piano, could hold the heart just as well, if not better than a piece that tries to mix in the soft, mournfull sounds of the keystrokes with techno, or electric guitar. Even if you just take out the record scratching, it would still be a captivating tune, but more so (I believe) if it stuck to the somber strokes of the piano keys.
BTW I still get spooked by the gameboy tones whenever I go through Lavender Town. *sigh*, such a pretty name, but such a sorrowfull little place.